Sunday, November 04, 2007

Haiku, Loneliness Theme

Skeleton tracings
Branches shiver against sky
Above leaves' carpet

9 comments:

Greggo said...

very lovely imagery, and i can really feel the loneliness.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely imagery

paisley said...

gives me an autumn chill.. very nice....

qualcosa di bello said...

a perfect capture of the loneliness of the season...

tumblewords said...

Beautiful picture!

AnnieElf said...

Beautiful image of winter's loneliness but filled with hope too.

coconutannies said...

"branches shiver" and I feel the chill! Lovely loneliness!

Judy Brutz said...

The leaves gone branches shiver against the cold. Nice imagery, evocative of loneliness when nakedness can't be warmed.

Patois said...

I can see the image in my mind's eye.