Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Haiku on Belonging

Another One Deep Breath prompt: Belonging

And the haiku based on it:

His rough hand and mine
Grasp their smooth, slender fingers
We are family


Crafty Green Poet said...

nice image of belonging there!

Glad said...

I like the contrast of rough and smooth and also how the 2 of you together "grasping" move toward belonging as a family. Thank you.

Clare said...

Sweet image of a family -- and I love the focus on hands. This is really beautiful!

Sharon Delman said...

Crafty Green Poet, Glad and Clare, thank you so much for the feedback. It's great to know people are reading and enjoying!

I look forward to reading your work too!

qualcosa di bello said...

a beautiful capture of what it means to belong in a family!