Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Haiku on Belonging

Another One Deep Breath prompt: Belonging

And the haiku based on it:

His rough hand and mine
Grasp their smooth, slender fingers
We are family

5 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

nice image of belonging there!

Glad said...

I like the contrast of rough and smooth and also how the 2 of you together "grasping" move toward belonging as a family. Thank you.

Clare said...

Sweet image of a family -- and I love the focus on hands. This is really beautiful!
:)

Sharon Delman said...

Crafty Green Poet, Glad and Clare, thank you so much for the feedback. It's great to know people are reading and enjoying!

I look forward to reading your work too!

qualcosa di bello said...

a beautiful capture of what it means to belong in a family!